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i think that we should go to mars because people need homes because
some of the people live on that street so many people need a house or maybe they can live in a colony on mars
so what i'm trying to say is that.
Earth is overpopulated
We have to go to another planet because on earth there are 7.6billion people on earth.
A planet that we can go to is mars because it is the closest planet to earth and its the only planet that can support life.
It must be agreed that we should build a colony on mars just incase earth gets hit with another meteor.
Earth might get destroyed
What about global warming our ozone layer is breaking and if it breaks then earth is going to get floods all over the world.
If earth is flooded then all the people on earth
will die everything on earth will die if we do not go to mars then life as we know it will be extinct.
In conclusion i am sure that you must a agree that going to mars is good because the human race will still be alive if earth get destroyed.
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i think that we should go to mars because people need homes because
some of the people live on that street so many people need a house or maybe they can live in a colony on mars
so what i'm trying to say is that.
Earth is overpopulated
We have to go to another planet because on earth there are 7.6billion people on earth.
A planet that we can go to is mars because it is the closest planet to earth and its the only planet that can support life.
It must be agreed that we should build a colony on mars just incase earth gets hit with another meteor.
Earth might get destroyed
What about global warming our ozone layer is breaking and if it breaks then earth is going to get floods all over the world.
If earth is flooded then all the people on earth
will die everything on earth will die if we do not go to mars then life as we know it will be extinct.
In conclusion i am sure that you must a agree that going to mars is good because the human race will still be alive if earth get destroyed.
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